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Alright, well here is my contest Entry for :iconpsychoslaughterman:'s Holloween Contest he is holding. Thank you again for letting me Enter, :) I Hope I can win even third place. <3

I was supposed to write a story for it so I shall! 8D

* On the Night of Holloween, all the children dressed up in their outfits as devils and witches and ran to the streets to collect candy from every house up and down the block. few children traveled alone, but on a dare, one little girl did. she walked down the cold streets that night toward the old, run down house at the end of the block. it was the last house she had to go to before she could go home and eat all her candy with her friends.
she cursed the boys who dared her, every small step of the way, for putting her up to this. swearing that she was braver then them was easy, Proving it wasn't as simple as she thought.
Dressed in a cotten 'Angel's Dress' with little wings strapped around her back, and a halo above her head, the girl looked sweet and innocent. Though such things didn't matter, for creatures of the night will take and eat just about anything that passes by them.... even kind-hearted little girls.
As the Girl walked up the long, dirt driveway of the house a rushing sound swept by her on the left side, and she skreeked out loud. jumping back only to trip over a rock, and fall backwards onto the cold, unforgiving ground.
tears began to spill from her eyes as she see just how stupid it was to have come up here. As she began to stand up, to head back home, not caring what the boys or other kids thought of her, a shrilling Howl ripped through the night.
chills ran up her spine as she glanced around herself. she stood straight up to her feet and backup down the driveway, Praying inside that she had only been hearing things.
Just at that moment, the hot Howl came again, and this time... it was much closer then before. The Girl screamed toward the woods around her, telling their heartless selves to leave her alone, but the howling ended not.

All at once A huge Black shadow appeared behind her and she tumbeled over again, kicking her tiny feet at the large beast. it panted,then sucked a lung-full of her sent in, readying itself to strike and claim her has it's meal.
It Whipped it's Huge clawed paw down and stuck it Into her Leg, roaring in victory for catching her.
the Girl fought to get free of the Beast's huge claws, as They stabbed into her. it growled deeply when she landed a kick straight in the eye of it. seeming angered by this, yanked it's claws painfully from her leg, and It Reared back onto two legs, then Roared at her.

The sound that spilled from it's thick, hoarsh throat, almost broke out The girl's ear-drums, but still she crawled away, screaming as loud as she could for help, dragging her wounded leg along behind her. steamy Blood leaked from her gashes, and all over the ground. The Beast Allowed her to crawl away further before it launched itself off with great force, and landed it's back legs on top of her small back, almost cracking it in half.
The Girl screaming in pain, and bellowed for it to stop. The Beast, having no mercy, Bit the Back of her Neck in thirst for more blood. it dragged her up in the air, holding her there for a moment, as it prepaired to rebite her for a better grip.
The Girl, in a desperate attempt to survive, grabbed her bag of candy, which also had a flash light inside it, and hit the beast's giant paw with it, as hard as she could.
the attack seemed to do nothing, but the Flashlight clicked on with the impact against the beast's paw, and it jumped back away from her, howling in shock, as Light covered it's ugly, demented body.
The Girl sobbed in utter pain as it backed away from her, teeth bared. blackish-red, slobber dripped from it's massive jaws, and now that it was in the light for the Girl to see, she became More afraid.
The Girl screamed again, and for the last time as the Beast lunged at her, sinking it's massive teeth into her head and crushing her skull in a million pieces.
The Beast enjoyed it's Meal that Holloween Night.*

Thank you for viewing This picture, and if you like it please tell me you do, and what it is that you like. :D I LOVE To hear it, always. :heart:

I hope you enjoyed the scarey story too! :3

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--Slake-sama

Picture, Idea, small coloring.(c) *looklooklookitabook Slake-sama

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ive give a critique but im lazy sorry xD but i like it =D

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Foolish fool
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Great work on the blood effect. ^^ Also, I love the way you did the fur. Overall, a nice Halloween piece.

Although the story is a little twisted. >w<

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"I don't wanna waste my time, become another casualty of society.
Never fall in line, become another victim of your conformity."~ Sum 41
:iconbluedragoneye:
:w00t: wicked love it good luck with it

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I have close my eyes, I am now blind to your evil doings go forth and kill each other leave this dying world for ever more, so die and leave us in blistful peace. Heaven or Hell I hope we will meet then my dragon rage is you will see. BDE
:iconsatsujin92:
oh nice! looks awesome!

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"A guy walks up to me and asks »What's Punk?« So I kick over a garbage can and say »That's punk!«. So he kicks over the garbage can and says »That's Punk?«, and I say »No that's trendy!«" - Billie Joe Armstrong - Lead Vocalist of "Green Day"
:iconpsychoslaughterman:
wow that is really nice, i like it alot, thanks for the entry

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"Why do you murmer? why do you dread the calm symmetry of death? is there no sucour to be drawn from oblivion? the pattern must be complete, birth is but the first preporation for death."

I like you... I'll kill you last :stab:

DAA Room#1323
:iconkibaxyru:
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PUPPPY? o-o

xD

Very good, sinister.

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:iconlooklooklookitabook:
xDD Not so puppish anymore. >3 HEH HEH HEH!

Thank you so much! :heart: it means alot!

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Thank you so much! :heart:

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why do people hate God? Because they know he is real, and they don't want to face it.
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^^ Thank you!

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THANK YOU!! :glomp:

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this in your signature.
why do people hate God? Because they know he is real, and they don't want to face it.
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